Killa bitch ima beat ya ass from japan back to cali
world war two.. shit ill treat you like pearl harbor and mauii
eh.. not that effective of an openign i though.. at least for texts anyway. metaphor is BASIC and the set up is a filler
bomb ya ass.. bitch i drop planes on you mutha fucka
u make me spit first so if im ill you just gon duck wha?
not impressed by this bar truthfully. It seemed basic, the punch wasnt that hard at all, i thought the set was going some were but it sort of fell off
ima press thes loss on ya like a tatoo permentanly there
battle records they stay there soo bitches will stare
wtf????? now not feeling your set bar, it was alright for a concept but was down with the wording. follow through was weak in general
ima punch ya till ya throw up.. okay now your ill
i think thiss bitch is running a fever, here i'll give you advill
heh, this wasnt that bad at all.. a little bit of a played concept but i liek how you directed it and was feelin the punch
Thats the only way you'll become i'll so stop bothering
shit your not ill hell i lost to a chic and i still be the one fathering
self boasting wasnt really digging it. nice connectiong throw the bars but it didnt really go any were after that

Over all you have a little bit diffrent approach than most emcees, it seemed more audioish that text. your punchs werent the hardest and really your metaphors lacked. Most of them were played or just to basic



Im'a 'KiLL' this kid Who 'Dies'.. Poked Your 'Eye'..
Ha.. I 'stabbed' Ya name 'UNTIL HE DIED'..
openign wasnt much really, alrigth attemped to play off his name but it wasnt that hard as a punch, metaphor was alright
Keep 'running'.. asian your Just Orange 'Chicken'..
'Jude-o' Choped your Shit.. Then Left Ya Mojo Missin.. (austin powers)
judo chop? wtf? LoL that was an alright bar. Metaphor was alright but you showing us the metaphor, do audio songs stop in the middle and say "hey, get it liek this, not like that"
A 'Cereal' Killa I am.. fagget, 'Tricks' are For Kid's..
I'ts Just a 'Rumor' But.. ya Flow's smaller then ya 'Dick Is'..
punch is alright.. cereal killer part is played, and really didnt hold much of a punch. follow through sort of made up for it though
Your 'Beggin' to Win.. Just like your Record, you 'Gotta Win'.. (1 win)
Your friends Tellin you Your 'Gay'.. There sayin, "You aint 'Toppin' Him!"..
alright personal shot iguess.. not that hard on a diss though. follow through was sort of weak, but an alright attemp
Now seeing that your not 'Above' Me.. wacks a Word You Must Be..
You 'died' so there's NO 'TiLL'.. and for your 'EYE', you suck 'SEE'..
ending wasnt the greatest, i felt that you really needed to add more of a direct punch in your shit. alright trying to play off his name i guess

Over all you had some alright punchs. Metaphors were there but you making people see situation, instead of letting them come to there own conclusion. Flow was alright, but the way you set your verse(structure) was alright, but could be worked a little better to show off your flow more.

Vote- Killa_cali



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Finally..from someone who's 4-0.....
LETS GET SOME VOTERS IN HERE WHO KNOW WHAT THERYRE TALKIN ABOUT.

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