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Old 02-11-04, 09:58 PM   #15
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Punches: Time, definitely hit harder, dropping kids line was alright.
Wordplay: Time, this is where you excelled, pretty dope wordplay.
Multis: Mist, had some decent multis throughout the verse, Time had some, but not as many
Personals: Time, had the really missed line, that line was kinda forced, but clever. Mist, you need to come up with something about his name, some sort of personal.
Opener: Time, the really missed line opener.
Closer: Time, had a weak meta, but still better than empowering himself. Close with a bang Mist.

Decent battle, keep the wordplay up Time. Keep elevating Mist. Also Time, finish with a bang, your finisher was pretty weak.

2nd line's a confession... i've already typed to much
I guess that's Mists best line, only praised himslef

ya the *thickest bitch on this sight, i aint talkin bout EYE DENSE ITY
u could be a *armless mid-wife* u still couldnt be "DROPPIN KIDS"
Pretty dop wordplay here, best lines

Return the favor in my sig, or the other re-opened battles (God Dammit!!!)
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