fuck what he said this was unbeleivable, ending was a little weak (awaking from a dream) been done, lol. But other than that, it was beautiful. Descriptive, great multis, this was very good. Alot of people in here underestimate the importance of rhyming, you don't. You were descriptive, refreshing and you still didn't compromise the rhyme, that's genius to me. This was a beautiful....I really enjoyed it. Chech fgee's 'the devils rant" it's similar and extremely dope. Good work.

"Spirits fleeing in fear not knowing they were horded for game,
The tallest man made monument could easily be dwarfed in his rage."
DDOOPPEE.