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Flyweight
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IP:
I think I like this - and the way you played on that one sound. Managed to stick to your topic pretty well too. Nice flow - the consistent occurence of the D sounds ensured that it never got off track. There were a few places where it seemed like a word was thrown in just because it started with D but you carried mostly well. Hit my "Broken Metamorphosis" if you can.
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