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Old 02-11-04, 10:56 PM   #5
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this was alright, i enjoyed it enough to read the whole thing, good imagery, saw a couple good worplay lines, and a nice topic. i do have one complaint though, it was very hard to catch the flow, maybe its just because i'm used to the simplistic structures, but throughout the whole thing i kept losing it. i dunno, prolly just me, judging by the rest of the feedback. but good drop, enjoyable, possible om of the month. who knows, ill hook it up with the nomination bro.
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