Thread: Intox vs John
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Old 02-11-04, 11:02 PM   #13
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Flow - Intox /Structure was much better than johns making it flow way better John try to make your lines the samw size

Originality - Intox /took originality with ease john much to basic wordplay

Punches - Intox /John your punches just whernt landing i felt intoxs alot more much harder punches

Personals - Both /Both of you had some nice personals, making fun of eachothers names

Multies - Intox / John you just had no multies so Inotx took this one with ease

Vocab - Intox /Intox had Much better wordplay and vocab very creative had me laughing

Overall - Intox /John you should go take a look at some of the elevated front lines and elite front lines and learn some things to elevate your verses and get alot of practice in. Inotx took this with ease.

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