proof, aight verse, could of been stronger, you focused
to much on your metas though, and not enough on your
punches, but you still had some decent lines in their, like,
your opener was aight, but keep elevating.

split, your verse was decent, just like proof you focused to
much on 1 thing, except it was personals not metas, really
i only saw like 1 or 2 punches in their, and they were weak,
you definatley have to work on youor structure dawg, honestly
i dont get it, cause you should be way more advanced than proof,
in my opinion, but keep elevating, peace.

my vote: proof

this guy needs to get dq'd, please do that favor, if you agree with me.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113726