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Old 02-11-04, 11:27 PM   #19
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426
get a final vote on this battle of mine^^^drop a link

punches-bretheran, str8 up that was a tight opener, other cat does talk bout himself alot
muti's-bretheran definetely, cats who been on here a while figure they aint need muti's anymore jus cus. add ta your flow and in a real battle das important

bretheran, need ta work a not to go to completely different topics and other cat need ta work on not talkin bout himself more and vocab, not rymin chest wit rest, and multi's dont know if i saw one from ya. good structure tho, bretheran u need ta work on your stucture so it dont look so elementary just flow wit it more.

vote bretheran

sumone get a real vote on my battle here please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426
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