Sorry I cant close this out for ya ....cause I dont have enough posts to vote but here's what I thought......

Puertoricanelly<your shit was a pain in the ass to read and on top that alot of your lines felt stretched. Attempted some punches, they just came through too weak...'watcha did last summa' line was was wack, but did have a decent meta though.Verse also was missing personals,except for the first line, which was played. Over all the verse lacked creativity......

Brethren< gets this one easily...better structure and flow by far.
Also showed some good creativity and had some nice metas,
combined with decent punches. Which just seemed to hit alot harder.
Verse probably could of had more personals though.....

Vote>Brethren

Honest votes> Bruise Banter vs. TJwillingham