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Flyweight
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IP:
"this was completely whack...
nothing good about this wow your words rhyme...
anywon can rhyme... lmao, you need a topic..."
I meant his scheme - it was quite compact - and it takes at least some skill to keep rhyming when your lines are short like that.
"can't flow too long
I'll get sea-sick"
Thought that and a few other lines were alright. Anyway he's just starting so he needs advice.
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