I cant officially vote (dont have enough posts) but here's what I thought....

> Kuniva took this all the way. Had Nice structure/flow and had Decent punches with some nice personals. Creativity could have been better though
>Lawyer decent opener but..the rest was trash. Punches were far too weak and were played. You should stay away from sex punches...they're played.Really needed more creatvity, and you should probably dump that 'super death bar'.....The shit in bold letters, is annoying as is the ( ) at the end of each line. Work on your punches and personals, and try to be more creative....

My vote > Kuniva


honest votes > Bruise Banter vs. TJwillingham