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Old 02-12-04, 12:23 AM   #7
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u both came ok....BI had personals and u both had good punches here and there....and u both had played ones.....here's some quotables....

Quotables:
Quote:
Originally Posted by COM
Brixton? Detained? no matter what I'll maim your health
I didn't mean another alias "make a name for yourself"
^opener was dope....nice work

Quote:
Originally Posted by COM
I gotta lock on ya chest... you'll be rocked from the collision
Want an easy battle?... put yourself in my position!
^funny...lol...the two lines before ur closer were nice too

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
see my Rhymes the winning Line..yours even miss the Bonus ball
its True COM has everyones numbers..at a fucking Bingo hall
^funny...coulda been worded a bit better...

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
create & Send..thats the only way you'll text & maybe get a Reply
but even Mobile Signals reject you..& get stuck in the Sky
^LMFAO @ 2nd line....good punch

Punches - COM....had more witty hits
Personals - B.I.
Opener - COM
Closer - B.I....didnt get it at first...nice though
Enjoyment - Tie
Overall - u both dropped decent.....BI had alot of personals which is good...but u just didnt use them right in my opinion.....nice work though....COM had a few old lines....the left foot, monopoly, and sun rise lines were kinda blah....but overall he had a hard hitting verse....no hate...good work from u both...

Vote - COM
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