opener:kuniva's opener started out real amature, but the seconds line saved his ass, it also made me laugh.

lawyer's opener started out really bad too, but just like his opponents opener, he saved it with the personal in his second line.......:::lawyer::


punches:: lawyer came pretty good with his punches, but you got to knock it off with the sexual punches, they just show a lack of creativity and thought...
kuniva really didn't have much for punches, bu the ones he had hit pretty hard.................::lawyer::

structure:: lawyer really fucked it up with the bold letters, I kept stumbling over them, trying to get to the next line.....
kuniva's structure was okay, he needs to pick a sylable count and stick with it.................::kuniva::

personals: kuniva

wordplay:none:

closers: both were weak, but kuniva edged out on top here.....::kuniva::

vote kuniva