interesting topic. its good to know other people's perspectives on
religion for sum odd reason. i can't really relate to yours, but it
was still interesting. the verse itself was nice. the structure and flow
were good, as well as the complexity. the consistency was good.
it seemed basic but to the point. once again, the topic was interesting
even though we don't see eye-to-eye. keep rhyming.

hit mines up if you can.

pz

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