nice verse. especially with that little twist at the end. lol. funny. its not
often where you see people go from serous to stupid. but in a good way i mean
that. the complexity was good, the flow was good, the structure was even
better. the word choice and all provided great imagery. i could almost see
her flesh and feel it, so erotic, and tempting, makes me wanna....lol. j/k
tight man. keep writing.

pz

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