very dope piece. kinda loss the flow and structure towards the end but it didn't
have too bad of an effect on the piece. it was no doubt a great read. especially
how it was based on a true story. it was heartfelt and well written. the flip
at the end made it all the more better. very good use of repetition.
keep at it man.

hit this up in return plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113569

pz

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