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Old 02-12-04, 02:56 AM   #9
Intoxicated
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Chugs took this...

I liked most of ya lines but the flow was really stretched... that really hert ya....
the punches were good tho and so were the metahz ... pretty decent opener n closer...


But HOLY FUCK, Lust u need to check out wackness emergency center... ya shit flow better than Chugs, i'll give u that... but ya whole verse sucked ass. the best line u had was ya first one and it was still pathetic. Your shit is so basic, you really need to expand ya mind and start figuring out how to write rhymes... not try'n to be mean but u really need to elevate any way you can ... good luck, pz

my vote - Chugs
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