killa kid gets my vote....

I just got one question, in the rules it says 10 bars minimum..thats twenty lines,,you both only posted five bars...hmm anyways...

opener: killa had a decent start, to me it was obvious, but it worked okay, the sylables in the second line kind of got off track....

mentalist's opener was just a step better because of second line, but he needs to try typing longer lines,because his seemed so short...::mentalist::

structure:: killa had all the structure, some lines got a little choppy, killa try harder next time....

mentalist had a major structure problem, but thats only because his lines were extremely short.....yo keep at it, you'll get better......::killa kid::


punches:mentalist's punches were super simple, and half of em were played, especially the micheal jackson punch.
killa was only a little better in this catagory, you both need to keep at it..
::killa kid::

personals: mentalist had none.....
killa had half a personal at the end of his verse...so...::killa kid::

wordplay::none

closer::killa had a better closer, the punch/personal didn't hit too hard but it did edge him out in my mind.............::killa kid::

vote::killa kid