Originally Posted by WickedWays

Id appreciate if you gave me some feed back from this verse i thought up, kinda my first real verse, not really a subject just flipped a few concepts..

I aint a rip this, im a rap bitch ~
And make like a womenisor at christmas
Im distant, with this shit, spit rhymes so ill
- i give aids to a deaf bitch!
And grab the lines of her death bed
and rip it.... rip-less.......
Lemme flip this,
I aint walk in the room, id rather blow that shit up
Hit and run on a slut - go home and jump in my truck
Ride back there, fuck that bitch up!
Spit till eternatys up, or you internally bleeding
- like you swallowed a cut!
Slammin it shut, im double, double you dawg i aint even call you the mut
Im on a full tank bitch... aint even busted a nut. ~~

~ - rap as in wrap - wrap a women up at christmas
~~ - full tank as in cars n engines and that shit not even busting nuts.

Wack.......?