sounds to me like you just like to rap things without making any
sense wutsoever. but believe me, there is nothing wrong with that
becuz honestly thats how i think all rappers/poets begin. they just
get the feel of the words. until they start to catch hold of the meaning.
thats when we all meet our lyrical peak. you'l get there sooner or later
if you just keep writing. remember, practice makes perfect.

keep it real. keep rhyming.

pz

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