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Old 02-12-04, 04:21 AM   #12
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dis was a good battle,not da best tho...
wordplay made some good punches but some were a bit played...structure was pretty elmentry and flow wasnt really there....work on it bro..
oakley...ur verse wan'st bad for a newb......some good punches but some were a soft....not really any structure and flow wasn't there at all....as i said not bad 4 a new boy tho......both had no personals witch usaly wins battles...so both of uwork on dat....overall wordplay's punches were a bit stronger and did have a little flow not much tho.....both keep it up...
v/wordplay!!!
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