bruise banter took this battle with ease........TJ, you had no real structure and your punches were played....need to work on personals and shit, make sure to hit your opponent harder....bruise, you had some nice personals and some pretty creative punches...you started your verse off nice and the closer was nice as well...in the middle you had a played punch, the C level one, but i liked the thimble/100 foot swell punch, that was creative....all in all my vote goes to bruise for the better wordplay and more creative verse.

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