MY VERDICT

Flow:Bruise
Structure:Bruise
Punches:Bruise
Multies:None
Creativty:Bruise

MY COMMENT

TJ: You need to focus more on creative rymes and punches dissin isnt a good way to win also try to keep your record to yourself dont tell people uve lost expecially in a battle it just gives your opponent sumtin to attack.

Bruise: Good flow and rymes but punches could of been more powerful.Also try workin in a few multies e.g put u in lyrical shock - now u feel a hysterical block . Lyrical and hysterical ryme and shock and block ryme.

I hope my constructive critism will help both of u to improve and keep rappin!

Peace and please drop sum feedback and vote in 1 of my battles!

BlackGrenade VS ShortY

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