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Old 02-12-04, 05:24 AM   #11
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Dis was a week battle....
BlackGrenade ur verse was kinda week and ur punches neva realy hit....there was no flow or structure....no personals....please evaluate,...
Shorty ur verse was ok....needs work tho...ur punches were ok but some were week.....u had on flow and ur structure was pretty elementry..no personalss...ppl personals win battles ok SO use them......overall ShortY won purly coz his punches hit and he had some structure....keep it up both of u
v/shortY...
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