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Originally Posted by Speek.E.Z.
that sums it up, you should go read other open mics to get a sense of how their written, and since this is a battle oriented go check front lines and such.. you can check my open mic for example..
its called I Bought Her A Vibrator Today
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Ok, but its not supposed to have meaning, its more of a verse for audio, no real meaning to the whole thing, but just funny concepts being spread out, there also a 'battle' kind of lines, its open mic, i was just putting up some concepts i thought up, but in all honesty, i still can't see which parts are wack, other then the subject.. bear in mind this is more audio oreintated. |