C - alot of played concepts.. punches were all stand-alone so it killed the flow.. ya vocab is ok but u jus need to come up wiv some fresh metas to make effective punches.. also try gettin more personal.. pick apart ya opponent.. ya verse was pretty general..

B - ya usin more complex vocab an metas but be careful not to knock ya flow off wiv stretched bars.. u need ta use less words to create ya punches cos they're losin their force by the time a sentence is complete.. nice creative finisher.. best line of the battle..

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