good battle for 2 newb's.....
Syck.. ur verse was ok....needs a lota work tho...punches came week...and there was no flow realy.....no personals...and structure....USE personals coz they win battles bro...aaiiigght...overall 5/10
Bruise Banter...ur verse was cool 4 a newb....dat line bout pollvoltin was good....punches were ok,some week....flow very basic...and not realy much structure,once again no personals......overall:6.5/10(not bad)...keep it up both of u.
v/Bruise Banter(beta alround)

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