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Old 02-12-04, 10:20 AM   #11
lilrenegade89
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k tiz had mad punches and it flowed great when he had multies they were very good
good vocab and word usage great strutcure no personals really
i could feal the beat
now g killerz u had very weak punches but adiquent flow no multies bad strutcure
no personals u need to elevate vocab was ok elevate
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