TJwillingham
Hard-hit-ta is a child molestes-ta yo....
He got that Micheal Jackson Icon and-his name-gives-him-away O…I C
What, and who you B…stay your distance U homo-sexual M C,
-confusion,personal = 1
Yeah…you like Mic Checkin don’t you?
You come the battle?
You gonna leave typing with your brain half scrambled cuz-of-da-way I made it rattle...
-played,punch,metiphore = 1
U sex craz, I’m more deranged
I’ll drag you outta my range and beat your ass wit paddle that is wooden in the rain
-strecthed,multi,-pointless,-filler = 1
cause’ll-sting more when its wet micheal…
I’m Pulp fiction and-M-Cee’s need to listen trust, Hard-hit-ta leavin-da-forum bitch’n
-flo,-structure,-retarded,metiphore,-confusion = 0

The absolute worste I have veiwed here so far. Terrible beyond belief. Im not going to give advice. Just Quit. You don't belong doing this. It's a waste of every one that try's time.
Overall = 3
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hardhitter
ok....ok.....ightt.....yo...
TJ ya willingly geting handed a loss ya fake and soft..
im not even gunna try cuz 2 lines is blowin ya off..
punch,metiphore = 3
like a dust dust breez in the wind,,
your wack at hart,no beef dont start..
cuz your lines are faker then a whoopie cushin fart.!!
-filler,multi,metiphore = 3
you gettin hit in every direction.like talibins robbin a mighty mart..
dont start son i will rip you apart..
your just another skinny lost nigga livin in the dark..
metiphore,-filler,punch,metiphore = 3
jump quick ta this call out!??
no need nigga i see you tryed to go all out..
but ya not suceeding like a high school drop out...........
personal,-repetivness,metiphore = 2
your quick ta cop out thought u was gunna be another no show..
but u came in with 1 of the gayest flows/////
-feed,punch = 2
who knows maby u will blow but i aint goin in the direction as this fag.......
pop shit again your ass will be found in a body bag............nigga........
metiphore,punch,-played = 4

A weak verse but not a terrible one. Your worste part was that out out out bar. It really required no creativity what so ever and it was filled with a fairly weak highschool metiphore. You were short and to the point which was good. And your last line was your best even tho the body bag concept is quite played. Work on the creativity.
Overall = 17
and mind you....this was out of a possible 60 not 30
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Vote = hardhitter

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