IP:
this was an interesting piece as ever
loved the opener..
the reflection of the sky in a puddle
and then the radio reference..really liked it
the filoding of the sheets of paper etc was all dope too
somehow i managed to visualise and place myself in the writers position thruout the verse
flow was easily latched onto..changed up in a few spots but..eh
this was one of those pieces i understood fully..and yet cant figure out what its about exactly
poetically written and delivered in a sound way
props again
i'd appreciate a reply to my Anopheles piece :-)
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