Lyrica MC
Street Champ is known for getting beaten just Like Eggs,
I got more chance seeing a pheonix than you have Mic Cred//
metiphore,metiphore = 5
This Guys A Champ? Theres more possiblity me Changing the Whether...
You Tried and Can't,why the fuck is street champ claiming to sever//
metiphore,personal = 5
Im straight off da block, wid so many different flows,
ur kickin up a lot of hostility wid each of ur week blows//
-self hype,-bad = 2[b]
ill rip u apart wid rhymes like holly water,
dis guy aint had sex for years, so he raped his own daughter//
[b]-wrong,punch = 2
beef wid me,im hear to tie da score equally,
serender ur soal, coz unlike urs my rhymes are written legally//
personal,-confusion = 3[b]
Street camp must av figer cramp,
coz hes rhymes ave only acheveid 0-1 battle ramp//
[b]-repeated personal,personal = 1
if "street camp" was a "street camp" he'd av a all da slags,
but like hitlar,wen he sees me he'll wave those wight flags//
-vocab,-wrong = 0

I'll be honest, You have a better score than I should have put. I was a little leniant at some points. You started off decent but as the bar's continued the commen sense and thought put into them declined. Hitler commited suicide when he was captured, there's no such thing as a slag, and you don't kick up hostility with weak blows. Understand what your writing down first. Work on you research.
Overall = 18
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Street Champ
You've been patiently wait for me, But I'll be Leaving you soiled like Baby Oak Trees
If you come off with Sick Lines, It's because you Bite Rhymes, With Rabies 4 Free
-stretched,multi,wordplay,wordplay,-played = 4
Blow so much you Maybe A Breeze, I'ma Fuck You the 1st time like Dating A Skeez
Poetic~Justice if I Rape You On Scene
-stretched,metiphore,metiphore = 3
A nerd bitch, My verdict is your Name, Being I never Saw You Murder A Soul
Chew you like Skoll, Resurrect MC's I've killed, And you'd get Spit On By Ghost
-stretched,personal,punch,punch,metiphore,-self hype = 5
Gotta grip on my toast, Comin more Loaded than the wins in the sig of your post
Nigga you're broke, Drop Your Frame better than You Probably Hold Bones
-stretched,metiphore,personal,punch,wordplay,-flo = 5
Shook off Abrasions, I'ma Scrape Skin on a spoon and Feed You Your Nerves
With Feminine Words, Shit Off Your Dome comes nice only with a New Dew or Perm
-stretched,vocab,punch,meitphore,multi = 7
But I will drop my verse first, So you can figure what is Hot and Not in yours
Or maybe carbon copy more, Even shark material from a diary in Lil' Sis's Drawer
-stretched,-wrong = 1
Bitch, Your like "Free"-With No Ass, Shit... Allen Iverson-Without The Ball
Nigga yous about to fall, You can't see me, When you Lost A Battle With Alcohol
-stretched,metiphore,multi = 2
This shit is funny, How I make you look like a dummy, Making your eyes runny
Go head a cry dunny, Fuck your Christmas, As I'm wiping my ass wit the prize money
-stretched,multi,-dumb = 3

OK you'd be alot more effective if you shortened up your lines. Try and cut them in half. You had alot of material in each line which is good, but to a point where you over did it. You also had to many multi's which annoy the hell out of people when they are in basicly every line. This was an average drop. It might have been OK wih a cut in half of the verse and more personals. Work on that.
Overall = 29
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Vote = Street Champ
It's obviouse people don't read the content if they don't like the structure

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Oakley -v- Empire