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Old 02-12-04, 02:00 PM   #11
KayOhh
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From: BC
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holmes:
Thinkin you fresh or new, wrong, all you are is asanine..
Hearin you spit is like hearin Lil Jon in his prime..
Aight
You "act" hard, well let me say you aint no Mekhi Phipher..
You wacker than that dude who wanted Xbox Live ciphers..
weak
You'll pay the piper, for this one my verse is just nicer..
Your verse is LOADED with shit, I think you best whipe her..
minor punch
My closer was weak last time so I'll just bail ya an..
Throw you back in rap jail, Ima lyrical stallion..
never admit you are weak, wtf...
This closer's closer to puttin you back in your place son..
Leave this site or I'll cut off your Sir Q Layshun..
Nice closer tho

Sir:
Fuck Knockin Ya Lights Out Im Cuttin The Power
Lost Ya Visions This Kids Softer Than A Flower
Nice first line opener
Y'd U Chose Me? Im Juss Givin U A 1st Loss
This Kid Isnt Gettin Very Far Like A Sumo Toss
nice
Keepin The Peace Cuz I Always Pass A Fist*
Punches Dont Affect Me Like Sponges I Absorb Hits
ok ok
Time To Say Good Knight Like Medievial Angels
Sir Is Givin You An L Like 90 Degree Angles
nice play
Like Garbage Planets Your A Waste Of Space
Throw You In Your Home To Put You In Your Place
Shitty close

Flow - None should get it, but i'll give it to holmes for havin one multi
Punches- again, its close, the punches weren't that good, but this goes to sir
Personals- I'm likin the first line, Sir
Vocab- Weak, but i'll give it to Sir for the pass a fist
Creativity- Sir

Vote - sir,

The battle was weak tho
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