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Old 02-12-04, 02:25 PM   #13
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Originally Posted by T West
Pen skills...would u mind telling me what pen do you use? Maybe that'll help me write better. Dam you and your skills...You must teach me this emotional stuff.

Anyways, opinion on the piece...like everything this guy does...I love it. The title fits the piece...but I dunno...it just sounds like it could be better...You have an imaginative writing style...a better title would be more consise for you. Such as "me". Anyways, thats jsut how I feel...plz return the favour and review my peice called "my journal"


^I was going to title this "Elements of a Legend"
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