i know that you or your boy dont need to be talkin trash
both you play your skin flutes so much you got milk mustashes
heh, alright opening...the concept was decent i suppose. punch wasnt that bad
you call yourself the best but you aint numba 1 or even the best
there just aint no way you gonna be winning this rap contest
eh, not hard at all.. lacks punchs and good metaphors
and the fact remains wen i pull out da glock,ya'll betta dash
ya motha should a left u wen she found u in da trash
weak.. lacks strength and metaphors..
You cant handle my metafives or duck my punch lines
Ill eat this cat up like big pun at lunch time
concept was alright. couldhave had more direction and strength
Fuck the vocab. before I burst like a bubble
You know if you start to mess with me there is gonna be trouble
weak. You need to diss your opponent, you need strength in your punchs
My lyrics are like AIDS cuz they spread for sure
Don’t try 2 mess wit me cuz there wont be any cure
weak. concept is played
bash-n-hit, wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch
Ya lack-the-wits, my voice boomin like I'm clappin-clips
Metaphor was alright.. needed more of a punch though
You wouldn't hold hot rhymes if you grabbed-my-lips
endign was alright but for a battle it could have been more. metaphor and concept was good. other than that, it lacked alot for a battle



everytime your voice gets SPOKE IN TRACKS, people just break out in OPEN LAUGHS,
your the biggest JOKE IN RAP
alright opening.. straight punchs.. but could have been alot harder
a verse of yours is bout as advanced as lyrics written by mc hammer after SMOKIN CRACK
your brain must have BROKE AN SMASHED,
not that good of a bar... the punch is alright i suppose.. metaphor is eh, jsut needed a litle more in it
or either as a child you got dropped on your MIND PLATE
cuz your logic just doesnt LINE STRAIGHT
punchs could have been better. metaphor is alright.. lacks direction
you could obtain a higher IQ than yours by testing a PRIME APE
youll never FIND PAPES (dollars)
alright punch.. concept is good but needed a little more with strength in your bar, yea mean?
matter of fact youll always BE WACK
kid couldnt get a "buzz" of your raps by stickin your lyrics in a den of BEESWAX
follow through is to streched, needed to cut that down and better your follow for it. metaphor was alright i suppose
you cant COMPETE, and you've never battled a respectable rapper and had them BEAT
your WEAK, your lyrics written on SHEETS are like "ice cream cones" cuz they melt when in the contact of HEAT
needed to have a better flow here to make this dope.. multi is alright except the punch lacked strength
beating me is something you dont have a SAFE CHANCE IN
your should follow your avy and just stick to BREAK DANCING
ok ending,the personal was an alright shot. could have been slightly better

Over all your verse had some alright multis, and metaphors strength and direction of punchs though needed more in them i thought.


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Took itwith better punchs more consistant and alright metaphors.

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