this was hot.. flow was steady but best of all the words were true, its fucked up how some people live compared to others worrying about shit everyone else takes for granted.. you did a good job of imagery and decent vocab, nice steady flow to help along the ideas making them very clear and easy to make out, nice job on this piece, peep this joint in return..

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