MmmmmmmmmK...

Nice little verse...

Wordplay was utilized.

A meta was thrown in.

Flow was on mark...

Multi's did their thing.

But the topic?

Booooooorrrrrrrring!
(notice I capitalized the B)

Nice intro to ya skills, but Open Mic is really for more meaningful shit...
(at least we try and keep it that way)

This was a battle verse, plain and simple.

A pre-write that you coulda dropped anyone's name into.

Nice, but nothing that makes me a fan of yours.

Peace

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