yea, easy victory for $ over

, but here is the breakdown:
aka Smiley:
your punches hit like pillows, your flow was wack, your structure was all fucked up, vocab was ok, your personals were very wack, your opener was crap, your closer was ok, but other than that, your verse just sucked, now i know you are better than this..
Best Lines:
ill leave you sportin SCATTERED SCARS
with your rhymes left in SHATTERED BARS
your punk ass gets "smoked" worse than the cigar in your AVATAR
^wack, but the best line in ur verse..
$:
your punches were good, your flow was very nice, your structure was very nice, vocab was good, personals were nice, your opener was off the hook, your closer was played but still very funny (nice personal), your verse was very nice, and thats why u get my vote..
Best Lines:
you say 'No Hate'... LOL Butt Fuckin you is Never Gon Stop
check his sig - the sad thing is... that IS my mother On Top
^lol, nice, very funny..
Skill he Showed? No... should have No-Showed again Instead
Think about it - just type ya Name... and you're givin me Head
^lol, very nice, had me rollin..
Vote - $pitacular
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