im not feelin the topic.. hate that gutter shit.. but as far as multis u had some good multis and a clean flow, stayed on topic for what it was worth.. nothing eye popping really.. lose the ~ in your flow.. a few strctehd bars but the rhyme scheme was somewhat complex leading into a smooth scrypt.. should put some content into it tho.. some better wordpling use of vocab and imagery.. holla

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