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Old 02-12-04, 04:11 PM   #12
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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Both yall had stretched structure which effdected your fllow....yoyoyo came with mostly played lines...still the same ol sex/fag jokes that are played to hell...No real good punches or personals...A pretty elemantary verse...not too much creativity in it that I saw
MC Aines had some alright shit...again no real personals...some ok punches....some showed signs of creativity...but a lot were kinda played too...like the hot shit line...played to hell...fic your structure so its not so stretched...
I give the IWn to MC AInes for more creativity and better punches in his verse...an overall goo verse

Please drop an honest vote here guys...I took the time for you...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459