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bitch every single lyric that you've ever WROTE BITES
just for having an annoying voice you deserve to get CHOKED TWICE
punch,punch = 3
and have your THROAT SLICED
kid, the whole reason you've got 1000 post in 6 mounts is cuz you've got NO LIFE!
punch,personal,-structure, = 6
your just a GEEKY VET, your whole lifes a boring SLEEPY MESS
kid your a loser who always stays inside houses like TV SETS
punch,metiphore,metiphore = 5
and fuck your internet crew, all yall assholes form a WEAK CIRCLE
talkin a bunch of shit when behind the monitor yall resemble STEVE ERKEL
personal,metiphore = 4
ill leave you sportin SCATTERED SCARS
with your rhymes left in SHATTERED BARS
your punk ass gets "smoked" worse than the cigar in your AVATAR,
multi,punch,punch,personal,wordplay = 8
and im by far the last nigga you want to be TESTING
cuz faggot ill punch your CHEST IN,
have your fuckin jaw broken in 3 places like kanye WEST CHIN
-self hype,multi,punch,metiphore = 6
any amount of illness is what this DUDES TEXT LACK,
my punches will leave you with a BRUISED CHEST FAG
ill hit you so hard you'll be seing more stars than the US FLAG
punch,-bad,metiphore = 4
ill hitting you with so many punches kid HOW WILL YOU SENSE?..
.. bitch just throw in the TOWEL NUISENSE
your rhymes are weak and dont flow like a constipated persons BOWEL MOVEMENTS
-vocab,metiphore = 2
im INSANE WITH SPEECH
put the gun to your head and blow you out the FRAME WITH HEAT
i'll leave his brain on the pavement just so he can CLAIM HES STREET
-self hype,punch,vocab,wordplay = 7

This was mediocre. Had how dropped the whole verse the same way you did in 2 of your bars i would have said this was a very nice drop. But you didnt. Im not a big fan of the CAPS either, sorry. What you need to do is just be more consistant with your heat insteada of Hot to Cold. Good Job.
Overall = 45
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$pitacular
I set this battle up twice... and you fuckin No-Showed both Times
then you set it up for Dick Ridin... 0 post newb votes in Front Lines
personal,personal = 8
you say you got 16 wins... but I Never heard of Nona ya Victims
that's cuz they all ya own Aliases... so no wonder you Ripped Em
personal,personal = 6
you say 'No Hate'... LOL Butt Fuckin you is Never Gon Stop
check his sig - the sad thing is... that IS my mother On Top
personal,punch,personal,wordplay = 8
Skill he Showed? No... should have No-Showed again Instead
Think about it - just type ya Name... and you're givin me Head
-indirect feed,personal,punch,wordplay = 7
Smile Bitch... before me & my dick make better use of ya Jaw
please, you're only Current Streak... in the shit in ya Drawers
personal,punch,metiphore,personal,wordplay = 9

The best I have viewed so far here. Refreshing after some of the battles I have voted on. Everything you had in here was near perfect, just the right amount of length and input into each line and well balanced with punches,personal's, and extensive wordplay. It was a pleasure reading this verse. This is an example of what you should do.
Overall = 38 + 15(for less lines and better wordplay) 53
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Vote = $pitacular

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