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Old 02-12-04, 04:49 PM   #6
Aisle Phive
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Originally Posted by Split.
this was alright, i enjoyed it enough to read the whole thing, good imagery, saw a couple good worplay lines, and a nice topic. i do have one complaint though, it was very hard to catch the flow, maybe its just because i'm used to the simplistic structures, but throughout the whole thing i kept losing it. i dunno, prolly just me, judging by the rest of the feedback. but good drop, enjoyable, possible om of the month. who knows, ill hook it up with the nomination bro.


This wasn't the normal AB rhyme scheme. I basically did two bars in a row with a straight flow, the next would pause, and it would repeat itself. It sounds better on beat. Thanks for the replies and nomination.

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