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Old 02-12-04, 05:31 PM   #3
Rawhead Rex
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From: The depths of hell
IP:

This was real good in effort and meaning and I'll have to agree with you on most of your points.
Nice execution, flow never really skipped a beat.
Some of the name dropping coulda had wordplay thrown in, but that really wasn't what you were going for.
I felt you wanted a straight forward message with no minced words.
You accomplished that.
Despite leaving out some of the other active names:
13th Disciple, Young P, Born to Kill, Avalon, Evolve, Diverse, etc.
I guess the rhyme woulda gone on forever if you'd listed the whole roster.
I liked what I read, it came from the heart.
That's what counts the most.
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