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Old 02-12-04, 05:43 PM   #25
Tactixx
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well, lyrical mc had a much better verse i thought, ok punches, you had a couple of nice meta's...the opener would of been better if that typo wasnt there..i couldnt really tell what you were trying to say....that last word on the first line.....(distabalize??? or disablize???) your flow was alright, went a little long in a couple of spots, but it went well.....structure was ok...the content was mleh....alright i guess, still enough to get him the win..
Lust-your flow and structure are a little off, makes it a bit hard to read, your closer was weak and didnt rhyme...try to work on those closers...and lots of your words dont rhyme very well, some vocab would prolly help....your punches were kinda weak...try being a little more creative....i've seen better from both of you...keep at it guys....

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