baby ny, horrible verse, your not very creative,
you need to work on that, your verse was to
simple, and plain, your structure wasnt good at all,
you need to work on that, next time throw some
personals, and multis in their, but keep elevating dawg,
peace.


hardhitter, nice verse, some decent punches, nothing really
stood out like your last battle, next time aim for the face and
not the stomach, ya know what i mean, your structure was a little
bit better than his......so.....work on that, i saw like 1 personal in
their, so keep trying to throw some in their, you should try putting
like 2 or 3 multis to, good job dawg, peace.

my vote: hardhitter

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THE GUY IM BATTLIN NEEDS TO BE DQ'D, PLEASE DO ME THAT FAVOR.