Thread: flash |VS| :)
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Old 02-12-04, 06:39 PM   #28
VanIllabymidnite
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Here it is.

Flow=Flash, his flow was better because of messed up structure.

Punches= he had more punches that were harder hitting. Flash you should work on developing your punches.

Personals= he had more personals than Flash and they were just better.

Vocab=Tie, neither of you really had great vocab in this battle, you should both work on it, good vocab can help you out a lot.

Over all= , you had some good punches in this battle, your structure was a bit messed up but that never wins a battle unless it's very close, but you should still work on it, keep working at it and it'll all come around.

Flash, your structure was much better in this battle but you need to work on your punches and personals, they are the key to winning battles, just work on developing those and I think you'd have a better chance at winning, keep it up and you should get there.

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Can you two give honest votes on my battles thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112136
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