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PROOF
aight, now im gonna battle this mothafucka kayohh
next time i challenge you, just say no
uhh......pretty weak......bad opener
i told him an hour and he thought i was messin
this bitch is tryin to rape me, please arrest em
dont ever say hes tryin to rape u.......1st line isnt a punch
i told him ten minutes now hes got second thoughts
can this bitch freestyle, umm, i reckon not
one of ur best punches.......
i can spit all the lines i need in the time i got
show up to ur house with a warrant and five cops
no punch........whats ur deal wit cops and arresting and shit........wack...
get ur ass in jail just cause u annoy me
but on this website, ur ass cant avoid me
wack punch.......they dont put people in jail for being annoying, and over the net people can avoid u.........so that makes that even wacker
this guy thinken we got votes, just cause he sways
now u can be sure i freestyle each day
ok first line.......second line isnt a punch.....and wack......
ull come with some bullshit that doesnt even rhyme
ill come up with a better line than u each time
second line is one of ur better punches........1st line is weak
i wonder if this mothafucka even has sixteen line
if he doesnt post, at least the viewers can see mine
what the fuck is this?........wack ass closer........
OVERALL - pretty weak........no really good punches.......half of the lines werent even punches.........3/10 at best
KAYOOH
Aight, time ta get this, blunt lit, start up the game, set up the ball n, punt it,
This verse is gunna be a, fun spit, cuz he’s more pussy than my girls, cunt lip;
blunt lit?.......uhh ok second line.........first line didnt make since at all........to start off a football game u dont punt the ball, so iono.....thats just weird.......
I’ve already destroyed one D12, wannabe, this hurt response I’ve, gotta see,
Merked kuniva, wonda if this one is also, gunna be, five ta zero fa me;
i dont see how kuniva is a D12 wannabe..........no punch.........dont talk bout the outcome in a battle verse........
And he’ll be soundin a, bit like Pharell, high noted after this lyrical, kick in the balls,
His verse didn’t have one clear punch, so if I have one, hit then he falls;
yea.......first line was ok.....second line was wack as fuck......dont sway votes in ur damn verse man.........who r u to judge that if u bring one punch hell lose.......weak as hell
He’s up in his lab, with a pen and a pad, only copyin styles, fixin up gay shit,
Cuz all I’m seein, is déjÃ- vu, … there must be a, glitch in tha matrix;
no punch........wack attempt at wordplay cause it didnt do shit for u.........like horses i have big dick.....wtf?.........that shit was pointless.........wack........
His rhymes go nowhere, jus round and round like, revolvin carasels,
Between this guy and dog shit, like train trax, I’m drawin parallels;
1st line was ok wordplay.......didnt get the first half of the second line.......and come to think.......i didnt get the second half either.........whats drawing prarallels mean?.......i get train tracks are parallel, but not what that means in terms of battle......hmm........
Voters, take a close look at what, he spit, it is obviously, pre-writ,
He had it already written, that’s why he wanted a ten minute time, limit,
i dont see how u concluded his shit is prewrit....its called keystlyin........no punch.......and wack.......
Shit, you must be close to dirty, dozen, can I have a signature do you, know them?
He mus be crazy wanten ta fuck wit KO, so nuts he belong in a, scrotum;
[/b]no punch........y would u ask for a signature.....that makes no sense..........and what kinda shit is......nuts belong in a scrotum.........weak.......[/b]
Here’s a tip before you spit, go get votes start dick ridin n, rushin poles,
Now that its ova he’s bitchen for a recount, sounds a lot like, Bush n Dole;
ok first line.....but i wouldnt suggest tellin him to get dr votes.......and y would he ask for a recount?.........wack second line.......
OVERALL - pretty weak as well.........had some more punches......but a shit load of fillers........just like proof this verse is a 3/10 at best.......
CONCLUSION - proof takes this because his flowed better......kayooh had stretched lines and wack structure........the punches proof had were better, and i dont think he came with as many fillers........kayooh forced to many multis, so most of his shit didnt make since........so proof gets my vote......
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