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Originally Posted by Oakley
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Oakley's beat?....
You gotta better chance at owning 2 left feet..
For christ's sake! I mean your from St. Pete!/1
Just drop you head, point an click the X button
You with a win is like Ray Charles puttin.../2
Your a gluten for punishment, an I'm dropin moderate..
Az's verse called me up, an asked if i can Father it/3
I like your sig also, It's nice how u reflect on your wins
1 of 50 kin? and Now your rapping? kid you forget your Asian!/4
15 years old? You can't even borrow your Mom's caravan...
Wait..you want a vote?...
You better have more roll-over more than a cingular plan/5
I aint even breakin a gland,dubz..u remind me of that kid Deluxe
Difference being?...he's makin money while u sit here and suck/6
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this was a rel good verse had some good personals and had a good flow cant really tell you to elevate good work hommie your a good MC in my books.......
ok now ima bout to battle a kid name oakley,
turn ur ass around kid lyk u doin the hokey pokey,
cuz i already won this battle shawty okie dokie,
bitch im already tired of battlin im a drive to maryland,
u herd i dont hit women so u got a sex change, now ya name carolen,
ya gon break ya knuckles trin to hit me dat hard quess wut...im still standin,
bitch only wanted to battle i looked like a herb wit 3 posts
trust me my punches n punchlines will break ya nose,
this cat lookin for newbs so he can brag n boast,
get over it u lost i exposed u lyk janet jackson's tit,
shut up bitch look who the herb now i jus finished it
WoW u need to elevate in ever catigoir lets put it this way u got served merked and killed.......got to LL and see how shit is done it can give u some pointers and u can see how to structuer your shit if u need any help just PM me thanx ....................
v/Oakley