RASCAL
MaNdiBUS it might be hard to diss you bcus i only no your name,
nah i chew up emcees like you thats how i got my fame,
personal,punch,-self hype = 3
yup look in my sig thats whos to blame,
my punches are like your face gaurantying people pain,
dnt question my potential im a burning falme./
-self personal,metiphore,punch = 4
This is just another Win on my battle record,
damn my second punch and your already floored./
-filler,-flo,-wrong = 0
im sure im rite in think this is your first battle thread,
so ima end your career quick with infa-red to your head,
aiight time to say goodnight with my last bullet to your head./
-contradiction,punch,-repetative flo = 1

Well lets see, You started weak and ended flat out horrible. Im sorry I don't really have anything nice to say about your verse. In that last bar you contradicted yourself by saying I kno and then I think and then you ryhmes head to head. All I can really say is focus more on making sense than anything else as of right now. Then work on your punches and creativity.
Overall = 8
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ManDIbus
That was trash god and ya style is shit,
u couldnt beat ManDibus if it was tatooed to ya dick//
-feed,-played = 1
my flows are ill, punchlines ridiculous,
I spit so sick niggaz like u catch syphillis//
-self hype,-played = 0
lyically ,metaphorically you not ready,
cut u open like a blunt, disconnect you air tubes wit a machete//
-structure,metiphore,punch = 3
ManDibus is nice, Punchline precise,
you claming u can eat me when u cant count barz right//
-self hype,punch,-fake personal = 2
I spit nutrients to soul let it seap through,
your nowhere near me, 2/3 of ya wins were by dq//
metiphore,personal = 5
now do u really wanna battle,
I'll crack open ya adams apple and drink the juices like snapple//
-filler,multi,metiphore,punch,-structure = 3
looke i aint even comin at u 4real,
lyricall you'll get killed, none can compare to mandibus neva have and neva will.................//
-structure,-self hype = 0

Not very good. It's a toss up between both of you, we'll see what the number's say. Anyways, You talk to much about yourself, more like you were battling a self glorication mirror rather than RASCAL. You need to throw more punches.
Overall = 14 - 4(4 extra lines) 10
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Vote = MaNdiBUS

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