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Originally Posted by KRAKKA T
Yo In This Battle With Magic...
Im Gettin Weird Vibes Like Im Battlelin A Fagot.....
The Story Of This Battle Is That U Just Dont Have It..
U Just Another Victim Who Needs Practice....
U Just Could Never Hack This,they Be Callin Me Krakka Cus Im White....
And The ''t'' At The End Means That Im Tight....
Me Rippin Ur Wack Ass Just Doesn't Feel Right....
Im Not Even Tryin To Merk Ya Whimpie Ass With All My Might....
When I Saw Ya Style I Thought The Was Somethin Nice...
So Heres Some Advice Work On Ya Lines But Until Then Im Sayin Good Night...
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nice verse quick and short and got the poin across..........nothing really wrong with it.......good work...........
yo.
allow me to start by sayin............................................. .....................................
your lyrics are shit and you fuckin suck.
you really cant spit and you win by luck.
i'm not scared whatever this faggot wants to do to me,
shoot at me
try to corner me
order me
try to kick me
lick me.
i am the one with the magic mic
and your the one who's mums a dyke
and will fuckin slaughter,
your little baby daughter.
how did ya like that?
ok ovisly your a newb elevate and work on better punches AND personals..the only thing u really had good was your structuer.......if u need help elevateing PM me.......
v/KRAKKA T