I can't say I had a favorite part to this, simply for the fact that I don't ever wanna hear about someone's mom dying of cancer...nothing against the poem itself tho, u did this flawlessly...imagery was really good, and gave a good idea of what exactly u were saying, without being too straight forward..you had really good vocabulary too....nice word usage too, made this a lot more heartfelt..and it is cancer week/month w/e it is..they been takin up money at my school n all that...personally I don't see how they dedicate one week to cancer patients..it seems kinda strange but oh well..sorry to hear about ur momz, how long ago did that happen?

peace

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